Mar
2
by Anja Parker, age 11, London
“Arghh!!” groaned Torterra as he fell back from Walrein’s Ice Fang attack. Just then, Infernape quickly countered with his Close Combat attack while Torterra was recovering, and brought the battle to an end.
“Another narrow defeat,” muttered Empoleon. They continued through the dark dungeon that was located in the underworld. The team knew that there were more strong Pokémon to defeat, however they did not know that Weavile, who was a spy working for the dungeon boss Giratina, was watching them from overhead.
Empoleon was trailing behind the others when Weavile swept down and in a flash, kidnapped Empoleon! Eventually, after a few battles, the remainder of the team noticed that something was not right. When they realized that Empoleon was not in their presence, Infernape and Torterra instantly started to shout…
“EMPOLEON – COME BACK HERE!” at the top of their voices. Suddenly, Weavile appeared with an unconscious, captured Empoleon.
“Since you’re all too weak for your own good, you can have your friend back!” he taunted.
With that, he hurled Empoleon at them and vanished in an instant. Empoleon landed with a crash on top of his team, and they all regained consciousness within a short time.
“Come on! we still have to find Weavile and Giratina,” commanded Infernape.
After some time they reached the end of the dungeon. Weavile was there, however he did not flinch at their presence, the Pokémon only chuckled. Then Giratina appeared as quick as Weavile could have ever done.
“This is not only the end of the dungeon, but the end of you too!” he growled in a deep voice.
Instantly, an earthquake took place and realising they had no choice, Infernape, Empoleon, and Torterra used their escape ropes and fled from the terrible disaster.
As for Giratina, he is believed to have been destroyed. However, Weavile still managed to escape and abandoned his master.
Brilliant Storry! I just Loved It!
boooo!
giratina rules
Sweet
Fabulous even better than the new story about Chimmy the chimchar!
omg it was so fabbulus im spechless
really love it well done i love empoleon!
brilliabt
this story is brilliant im amazed by the genius mind who came up with this story
i want to know what happens next
Brilliant.
Weaville seems like one bad villian…
nice story
GENIUS THIS GUYS GOT TALENT SHOULD BE LEADER OF THE POKEMON GEEEK CLUB
JAMIE SAYS IM A NERD
incred just loved his escape rope scene it was so good i wet my self just reading it for the 1000000th time in one second and 2.5 mil seconds if u get my drift. my first post lol just thinkin about it makes me cry booooo hooooo booooo hooooooo im in a flood of tears oh im drowning ahhhhhhhhhh
im ok dont fret just eating a tepig on toast and a hot lilipup hahahahahahaha im sooooo funy hahahahah !!!! isf u dont find it funy u make me cry boooo hoooo im drowning in a floood of tears glug glug glug splash haaa im soo funy!!!!
ssssssssshhhhhhhhhooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
really good!!
awesome
meh, my poke books re better, completed two. his books is rubblish.
I hated it!
It ended too quickly, the earthquake was an unimaginative and quick ending!
It is obvious that you are a novice writer, go away and come back with a good story!
it was fine i bet you could have done better though….
you need to do a little work on the ending and innosint dont mind him
it was ttttttttttttttoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo short
exactly!!!!!
I appreciated your article but I am really not liking the concept. Is it a default style and design or some thing? Best regards though and maintain publishing!